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Ceridwel
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 5:49 am    Post subject: Cool descriptions

I love great descriptions. I saw this one tonight and wanted to post it to the community. I think it is really cool.

http://www.abandonedrealms.com/players/display.php?name=Synestriel


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Description:
This is a rather uninteresting girl.  She's one of those dumpy
unattractive sorts of girls that you remember from your youth,
the sort that no one ever wanted to play with, who always had
vegetable matter unknowingly stuck in her teeth.  This one
does, too.  She is also unaccountably grubby.  She has little
brown eyes set a bit too wide into a chubby, pleasant, freckled
face that wears the sort of earnest expression of someone who
always wishes to please.  It seems however that no one has
asked her to please wash herself, because there are yellowish
stains under the armpits of the white linen top that she is
wearing, and her general aura is a strong stench of stale sweat.


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Davairus
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 5:55 am    Post subject:

Someone described their co-worker.
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Vanisse
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 8:03 am    Post subject:

LOL dav
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 22, 2013 10:57 am    Post subject:

Dav you just made my day with that comment lol
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:00 pm    Post subject:

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What an odd looking dwarf.  Gilbrid stands remarkably short of stature,
even for a dwarf, but is as thick as a large keg of beer.  Still a young
buck, his dark brown beard is relatively short.  His mustache however is a
true sight to behold.  It appears to be as old as the mountains and as thick
as them too!  Growing wild like a blackberry bush it covers nearly the
entire bottom half of his face.  Deep brown eyes examine you from underneath
dense eyebrows.  Armed to the teeth, Gilbrid stands with his chest puffed
out and ready for battle. 
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Vanisse
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:24 pm    Post subject:

gonna add a kickass background too.

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Background:
Although already eighteen years of age, Iturial was only born days ago.
Previously known by a more common name, Antonius, a young orphan wondering
the docks of Darkhaven, fell head over heels in love with a little
half-elven minx of noble lineage from the houses of Valour.  Yet, not long
after possession of his heart did the vixen wrench it apart, tearing it
asunder with the provokation and seduction of another unsuspecting boy.
Pain beyond relief plagued Antonius and cheerless were the days until a
fateful encounter with a dark-knight mercenary taught Antonius the joys of
torture and the depths of drunkedness that power brought.  It was a matter
of time before the hypocrisy and vacuous pretense of Valourians itched
Antonius beneath his skin and he sought comfort from the blood and warmth of
Lexi, the belle from his youth.  Determined to procure his first non-animal
target, the unsuspecting broad was stalked just as she hunted, shackled just
as she bound, hurt just as she maimed, and slain just as she killed.
Debauched in the bacchanal event, Antonius set up a poor imitation of a
shrine and henceforce was known as Iturial. 


awesome stuff guys Smile
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 5:15 pm    Post subject:

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The pigmentation of his skin and the expression on his face is of one that is trying quite unsucessfully to move his bowels. His brow is covered in beads of perspiration. He is strikingly large, though quite "normal" in size for a giant. Robes of deep purple are cinched simply at his waist with rough cord, and flow majestically as if in a constant wind. He wears a fine stole depicting the glee of the wicked.
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Vanisse
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 5:37 pm    Post subject:

LOL. i remember reading this the first time it made my day
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 12:16 am    Post subject:

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the expression on his face is of one that is trying quite unsucessfully to move his bowels.


fucking hilarious
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2013 9:47 pm    Post subject:

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This practice dummy is large, broad-shouldered, and clearly designed to
look like an overweight human.  Its curly red hair has been cut somewhat
short in the front, but is much longer in the back, which is currently
heaped in a matted mess near the center of its back.  Its mouth is wide and
uneven, apparently locked in a perpetual scowl.  The dimples in its cheeks
confuse the otherwise consistent design.  Its bright blue eyes are set
relatively far apart into its egg-shaped head, and its nose is wide, not
unlike the rest of it.  Upon closer inspection, it seems that this is no
practice dummy after all, but rather a human on the lower end of the gene
pool. 
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Ceridwel
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 04, 2013 7:27 pm    Post subject:

Another great one. Player had it done before 10th rank too!


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Piercing amber colored eyes look at you over a prominent nose that does
not altogether overpower a strong face, tanned from years in the sun working
working hard, and faint laugh lines crossing at his eyes and corners of his
mouth show his life has not been wholly devoted to toil and work.  There has
been laughter, joy and sadness in equal measure, and though the white
streaking his goatee and moustache from their customary dark brown are
premature for one of his age, there is still a vigour in his frame and his
stance that speaks of power and strength, and a laughing twinkle in those
hawk-like eyes balances the almost melancholy wisdom.  About him clings the
slight scent of cinnamon, exotic flowers, and hempen rope, as if straight
from a sea voyage to stand before you he has come.


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PostPosted: Wed Jun 05, 2013 1:00 am    Post subject:

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This female humanoid shares more bird-like features than human. She has
a slender build that looks rather fragile. Her head and torso are covered
in fur, which is dark slate gray on its dorsal parts, and creamy white on
its ventral parts. The feathers of her wings and tail are also dark
slate-gray. She has an elongated head, a long skinny tongue, a flat nose
and very beautiful green eyes. Her movements are fluid and the stealthy way
that she moves only adds to her lethality.


Really saw this one in my head. Nice!
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2013 3:00 am    Post subject:

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The air is hot and sticky around the she-giant hunched over before you. She is considerably muscled, well-busted, and is at least seven feet in length. A rat's-tail of coarse, ashen hair sits tied off atop her otherwise bald skull. Her smooth-looking skin is lightly crusted and occasionally sparkles like a fine whetstone. She wears a small bone-piercing in her septum and her beady eyes and sharpened fingernails pulsate with a dim glow. Your head begins to swim in the rich, earthy musk and scents of intercourse emanating from her.


LOL Shocked
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 05, 2013 2:26 am    Post subject:

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Dark brown scales cover the majority of his thick hide, with a dusty tan
wrapping thick stripes around several portions of his midsection and tail.
His eyes are pupil-less and they seem as bottomless pits staring out from
under his jutting scaly eyebrows.  A long and wide snout completes the form
of his head.  Dirty, chipped, but razor sharp teeth stick forth haphazardly
from between his upper and lower jaw.  Broad and thick, his tongue rests
heavily in his mouth.  His head sits forward atop his narrow shoulders and
his back arches over in a terrible display of posture.  Dangling down his
arms appear as that of an orangutan's, in that they very nearly drag across
the ground.  Legs reach out in a curious upwards fashion from his hips,
tucking his knees over and ahead of his long scaly feet, giving him a
somewhat crouched stance.  The distance between his shoulders and hips
extends to a surprising length, and it is thin all that distance.  The long
and chipped claws on his toes have slight remnants of encrusted blood.
Appearing as an extension from his back, his tail extends down from hips and
reaches out behind him a near ten feet, tapering off to a whip-like tip.
Running down the spine of his body, starting from atop his brow, larger,
brilliant sky blue kite-shaped plates stand atop the smaller scales and rise
out away from his body, clicking as they slide together when he moves.  His
form is massive, even in his hunched over stance he stands much taller than
any man.  He walks with a curious gait, an almost undulating movement across
his torso and tail, using his hands more often than naught.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 12, 2013 5:51 am    Post subject:

Tiqa wrote:
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The air is hot and sticky around the she-giant hunched over before you. She is considerably muscled, well-busted, and is at least seven feet in length. A rat's-tail of coarse, ashen hair sits tied off atop her otherwise bald skull. Her smooth-looking skin is lightly crusted and occasionally sparkles like a fine whetstone. She wears a small bone-piercing in her septum and her beady eyes and sharpened fingernails pulsate with a dim glow. Your head begins to swim in the rich, earthy musk and scents of intercourse emanating from her.


LOL Shocked


Hahaha.... The scents of intercourse.... Some teenage boy probably got a bit too turned on while describing his char :p
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 28, 2013 6:23 am    Post subject:

When I read that all I could think of was "Death by sno sno" from futurama
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 11, 2015 3:23 am    Post subject:

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A tiny creature is here, appearing rather like a toy that a Human child
might play with.  Muscular and fit for its size, this pale-skinned creature
has vibrant purple eyes speckled with green and gold.  His short hair is
chopped roughly into a spiked mass and looks rather like flames emanating
from his head.  A pinky has been cut clean from his left hand, but the rest
of his fingers twitch constantly as if playing a piano.  He moves in a hasty
manner, never seeming truly at peace staying in one spot.  Even standing in
place, he sways back and forth as if predicting a need to move.  Tiny
transparent wings rest awkwardly on his back, jagged angles showing clearly
the uselessness of them both.  A scar rests on his right forearm in the form
 of a 'T' branded roughly.  This creature clearly can't keep his hands to
himself. 
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 24, 2016 7:40 pm    Post subject:

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A terrifying demon is here, cast in the form of a monstrous,
anthropomorphic fly.  It hovers about on broad, membranous wings that
produce nothing more than a reticent quiver.  The head is predominantly
comprised of bulbous, compound eyes, glistening with a metallic sheen as
they flicker in every conceivable direction.  The lower half is even worse.
Slashing mandibles to shred it's prey to ribbons, and an overtly enlarged
proboscis to lap up the fluids.  Both the head and thorax are covered in
hair-like projections, which writhe with millions of smaller flies,
ceaselessly contesting for position among them.
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Ceridwel
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2016 1:55 pm    Post subject:

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Born out of an inception when the cell division process had gone awry,
this abomination is unlike any of its kin.  It is an embodiment of two
coupling bodies and minds with no given name but the concatenation of their
very own.  It has a rod-like head, capped like a mushroom, with a thin
slit-like opening at the top, probably used for the expulsion of toxic
substances from its body.  Two bulging spheres hang at where one would
expect the eyes to be, although no real signs of its eyelids or pupils can
be seen.  Its mouth is circular and huge, with the two outer lips oriented
around the opening in the vertical position.  Clear and glistening saliva
coats the entrance of its mouth to facilitate ease of ingestion.  At most
times, its body lays flaccid with a pink hue to its skin.  At other times,
its body will turn rigid with a purplish tint.  In this stage, its head will
twitch uncontrollably, signalling danger to those around with its
tentacle-like limbs. 
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Vanisse
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 28, 2016 3:49 am    Post subject:

Okay, this isn't a description, but I just read this background and it blew me away.

http://www.abandonedrealms.com/background.php?bg=4700&name=Nyhlis
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